Headlines

The Associated Press Stylebook offers this guidance for the adjective police- or officer-involved:

Avoid this vague jargon for shootings and other cases involving police. Be specific about what happened. If police use the term, ask for detail. How was the officer or officers involved? Who did the shooting? If the information is not available or not provided, spell that out.

Local newspaper, television, and radio headlines failed to follow this basic advice, instead parroting the official release from the City of Iowa City headlined “DCI investigating Iowa City Officer-involved shooting“:

The Gazette: Iowa DCI investigating Iowa City officer-involved shooting

KCRG: Iowa DCI investigating Iowa City officer-involved shooting

KCJJ: DCI investigating Iowa City officer-involved shooting

The stylebook further offers this guidance around initial reports, emphasis added:

Be cautious about initial news releases or statements from law enforcement or other officials. Accounts by police, especially in the hours just after a crime, are very incomplete and can be inaccurate, whether about specific details or about motivations behind the crime. Press for details and substantiation: How do authorities know? If key details aren’t known or can’t be confirmed, say so in the story.

Attribute carefully and thoroughly.

If descriptions change, say so. For example: The police chief initially said the shooting was not a hate crime, without explaining that conclusion, but later said she believed the victim’s race was the motivation. She said the suspect had posted racist rants on social media.

Also remember that police may release information before officials review footage from body cameras, dashboard cameras, surveillance cameras or bystanders’ cameras. What they see later in that footage may change the story.

That’s why it is crucial to always work to verify and corroborate official accounts by talking to witnesses, victims, relatives and other sources. Use verified or vetted user-generated content to give you eyes and ears on the ground if you can’t be at the scene. Look for livestreamed videos and call nearby homes and businesses to find additional details for your coverage.

Local newspaper, television, and radio headlines also failed to follow this basic advice, instead parroting the official release language that the police “observed the subject with the knife making threatening statements and gestures”:

Iowa City Press-Citizen: Iowa City police shoot, kill person wielding knife

The Daily Iowan: IC police officers shot and killed person armed with knife

Iowa News Now: Iowa City police officers shot and kill person armed with a knife

KWWL: Iowa City police shoot suspect armed with knife on Southgate Ave

Only one local outlet seemed to tread carefully and follow this simple guidance:

Little Village: Iowa City Police Department officers fatally shoot a person while responding to call Tuesday evening

I appreciate you, Paul Brennan.

Is a Replica Important or Not?

Executive Editor Zack Kuckarski of The Gazette in an email to subscribers:

While Christmas falls on a non-print day for us, we will not be producing a local digital edition on Christmas Day. This allows our staff some time to spend Christmas Eve with family and friends. Any major local stories will be posted on thegazette.com.

We will also have a short section of national stories that will be available. We will resume local digital replicas on Dec. 26 and will be in print like normal on Dec. 27 and 28.

We will produce a local Green Gazette digital replica edition on January 1.

I don’t get it.

Either the “Green Gazette1 digital replica” is important enough to produce daily or it isn’t. Laying out a “digital replica” is wasting resources and keeps The Gazette locked in a print-first mindset instead of freeing it from the bounds of producing a daily news bundle.

Skip Christmas, I say, and never start doing it again.

  1. “Green Gazette” is terrible branding. I think it’s supposed to suggest it’s more environmentally friendly than a paper driven over from Des Moines and then driven to your house, but it makes it sound like it is a completely different product than The Gazette which it isn’t. ↩︎

The Gazette is Selling

Yesterday The Gazette, one of a dwindling number of locally owned news operations around the country, announced a planned acquisition by an out-of-state conglomerate.

The Gazette‘s announcement:

Minnesota-based company is entering into an agreement to purchase The Gazette and 11 community newspapers, the companies announced jointly Tuesday morning.

The agreement between Tom Pientok, president & CEO of Folience Inc., and Mark Adams, president and CEO of Adams MultiMedia (AMM), is expected to be finalized by Dec. 1, at which time most employees of The Gazette will join Adams MultiMedia. Employees of The Gazette were told of the transaction Tuesday morning.

That more change was coming to a local newspaper is not a surprise. As Paul Brennan notes in the The Little Village, there have been signs of needing to change coming:

In recent years, the Gazette has experienced the same financial difficulties many newspapers have. In 2021, the company sold off its printing plant, laying off 62 employees in the process. Printing of the paper was outsourced to Gannett Publishing Services in Des Moines.

In January, the Gazette announced it was cutting back its print edition to three days a week, Wednesday, Saturday and Sunday.

It’s easy to suggest this is another terrible consolidation of local media, and the values of the organizations ownership deeply matter, but I’m willing to wait and see how this plays out.

I said “news operation” above intentionally. Folience, Inc., the local, employee-owned company that owns The Gazette owns a newspaper and lays out daily editions, but only prints the newspaper three times a week. And, I’m told, editors have resisted pursuing digital products like email newsletters. All of this is bizarre to me.

So they’re a news operation, and the sooner they realize that, the better. To survive, the digital product has to come first, and if Adams MultiMedia can help pull the local operation around to that, it only helps.

I should note that I do not currently pay for The Gazette after being a proud subscriber for year for, really, one simple reason: the website could not keep me logged in, so I finally got fed up with having to log in ever time I followed a link instead of just getting to read the story. I was delighted when I discovered This One Weird Browser Trick that let me just…read the news. Give me convenience, and I’ll pay for it.

Loose Lips Sink Transgender Kids

A hed in The Des Moines Register:

Urbandale school board refuses to remove gender identity protection despite new Iowa law

This is sloppy and dangerous. 

There is no law requiring Iowa’s cities, counties or school districts to remove gender identity protections in the same way the State of Iowa did when we became the first state in the nation to remove civil rights protections from a previously protected class. Doing so is pre-compliance. 

It’s dangerous because plenty of entities were confused and removed protections anyway before restoring them, including the Iowa City Community School District, the City of Dubuque and the Dubuque School District, and this framing only reinforces this misconception.

How Lame Can It Get?

I know I said it wasn’t worth critique any longer, but a double byline story carrying this clickbait hed is outlandish.

If you have to print this, maybe just run the number? At least they got in published the next day, I guess.

Iowa City Man tells UI Police Detective to ‘Leave my Family Alone’ After Harassment

Oops, sorry. The Gazette’s headline is “UI police detective tells Iowa City man to ‘leave my family alone’ after harassment.”

Headlines frame stories — in the age of social media, are all many people read — and, unlike the Daily Iowan’s piece, this frame only tells the story of the prosecution and the police.

The ledes of the two pieces tell two very different stories. Compare the two. Here’s Trish Mehaffy’s from The Gazette:

A University of Iowa police detective said an Iowa City man created a social media profile of him using personal information, including his spouse’s name, and used “hateful discriminating language” that he would never use.

The first three paragraphs are all from the detective’s “victim impact statement.”

Meanwhile, here’s Emma Jane’s lede in The Daily Iowan:

Daniel Kauble was sentenced Thursday to two years of probation and six months of suspension — meaning he will serve jail time if he violates probation — for operating a parody account on X, formerly known as Twitter, impersonating University of Iowa Police Department detective Ian Mallory. 

Simply regurgitating police reports, court filings and victim impact statements is stenography, not journalism. I don’t care how you feel about this series of events, acknowledging Kauble’s Twitter account was a parody is key to understanding what’s happening here, and “satire” or “parody” do not appear in The Gazette story.

(The Press-Citizen, if it ever covers this, will do it at least a week late with a clickbait headline such as “Who Harassed a UIPD Detective?” but it’s not worth criticizing.)


Update: The Press-Citizen got a story up on March 20 and included the adjective “parody”

It’s Not Even Worth Criticizing Anymore

My camera roll contains this front page from the Iowa City Press-Citizen with a story about a one-term president who’s been dead for 60 years:

Meanwhile, one of my mentors, former music critic and now emeritus professor Don McLeese, writes on social media about a Des Moines Register review of Foreigner’s Iowa State Fair performance:

An embarrassment, but I fault the paper rather than the reporter pressed into service. In graf 3 we get the names of all founding members, none of whom are currently in the band, while graf 4 gives the names of who is now in the band, without saying who does or plays what. But really, when this is your lead graf, you’ve got nowhere to go but. . .nowhere:

“Though Foreigner might be on their Farewell Tour, it felt like the very first time, as the band proved to the crowd of 11,141 on the second day of the Iowa State Fair that they will forever be one of the greatest rock bands of all time.”

This is not a bash-the-reporter post. It’s just hard to even feel like it’s worth criticizing Gannet, which strictly paywalls its sites, makes it impossible to unsubscribe, doesn’t offer its reporters the support — editors, pay, guidance, mentorship — they deserve and isn’t producing news that serve its communities.

The criticism I’ve leveled in this space over the past 15-plus years have often been dopey, but mocking critiquing has always come with some hope for improvement. That hasn’t been possible at Gannet properties for a while now, and my disappointment and acceptance is now complete, making this the last time I plan to acknowledge the present-tense existence of these papers.

So -30-, I guess.

Respectfully, Fuck Off

A footnote on a column by Aletha Cole, The Gazette’s conservative columnist, about trans and non-binary protesters in Johnson County:

*For reasons of conscience, the author respectfully declines to use “they/them” as individual pronouns.

These “reasons of conscience” are unspecified, and appending “respectfully” doesn’t make it so.

Via Yelp via the Washington Post

The Des Moines Register:

Everyone has an opinion on who makes the best pizza, and to that end, the Washington Post took a different approach to determine the tops nationwide. The editors there started with the 7.5 million Yelp reviews of 85,000 pizza establishments nationwide, developed a formula to figure out the best — taking into consideration the rating, number of reviews, and how often reviews mentioned that particular pizza style, the Post said — and then presented it to the public.

The Des Moines Register, winner 17 Pulitzer Prizes, was once a proud newspaper. Now they run stories rewriting data journalism about pizza from the Washington Post.

NPR Quits Twitter

National Public Radio has left Twitter, like list of people, after being “state-affiliated” like Chinese and Russian propagandists. The organization won’t return even if the label is changed, says NPR CEO John Lansing, who told in-house media reporter David Folkenflik:

“At this point I have lost my faith in the decision-making at Twitter. I would need some time to understand whether Twitter can be trusted again.”

Better late than never.